Here is my third draft. I am much happier with this version as I have most of my own footage and the structure works much better. I have included text animations so my production is much more engaging. I have noted that for my final draft I will need to adjust audio levels so that I can be better heard while still providing non-diegetic sound to provide the preferred atmosphere. Finally I will need to cut out 2 minute as I am over the 5 minute time limit.
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