Magazine version 1

 

Here is the first draft of my magazine. I have noted that I need to shrink the central image and change the tense in which I have written so that it sounds becomes third person and sounds more like a Journee in which the writer had met George J at a talk he was giving for... This would be more typical of a magazine and more engaging. I had noted that below the title I had put by George J which would have been incorrect as I cant interview myself, so I changed the name to a writers name. As I had included a "I" it was pointed out to me that I needed to put the first letter of the starting sentence as "I" with a slight increase in font size. 

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