Constructive Criticism

 

The video above shows the introduction with writing over the top stating points on how the action sequence, diegetic and non diegetic sound can be improved. I have chosen to present my information in this way as I can visually see exactly what scenes have the issue and what the issue is. The video will allow me to get a written description to compare with what I am seeing. I will be sure to use this as a guide to my final production to ensure that my final draft will look and sound better.

NOTE: In my final draft I will use a better quality camera and I will use Da Vinci Resolve 16 as it has a wider variety of tools and effects that will come in handy for achieving the standard of work I require.